Anne
Greene here. As writers we want to show
and not tell. If you have a character who is lying, how can you show that?
Below are nine suggestions to help you with showing.
1.
The
hand covering the mouth is your
character’s subconscious reaction to saying deceitful words. Sometimes the
gesture might be several fingers or a closed fist over the mouth. Or your
character might place a finger over her lips in a shush gesture. Do you ever
find yourself using this gesture?
2.
The hand
touching the nose or rubbing the nose can signal lying. What the person says
stinks to them. A person’s nose expands with blood when lying. The increased
blood pressure causes nerve endings in the nose to itch.
3.
The
nose itch is also used by a listener who doesn’t believe a
speaker’s words. Watch your audience. Are they scratching their noses?
4.
The
eye rub. The eye rub attempts to block out deceit, doubt, or distaste or to
avoid having to look at the face of the person who is lied to. Men rub their
eyes vigorously if the lie is a whopper. They will often look away. Women use
small touching motions below the eye. The eye
rub often occurs with clenched teeth and a fake smile. How’s that for a villainous
expression?
5.
The ear grab. The ear grab is a symbolic attempt by a listener to hear no evil
by blocking the words he hears or tugging on the earlobe. The ear grab can also signal a listener has
heard enough and wants to speak.
6.
When a person uses the ear grab along with the nose
touch this shows anxiety.
7.
The
neck scratch. Scratching the neck
below the ear lobe five times shows doubt.
8.
The
collar pull. Lies cause a tingling
sensation in the face and neck tissues that need a rub. So some people use the collar pull when they lie and believe
they have been caught. The collar pull
also shows anger and frustration.
9.
The
fingers-in-the-mouth. This gesture
shows a need for reassurance. This goes back to the reassurance a child
receives sucking on his fingers.
Next week I’ll continue with BODY LANGUAGE FOR YOUR
CHARACTERS.
I hope this little lesson helps you SHOW your characters’ reactions rather
than TELLING them.
You can buy my books Masquerade Marriage and A
Texas Christmas Mystery at www.pelicanbookgroup.com. Anne Greene
author. Marriage by Arrangement
releases December 6, 2013.
Which telling action do you like best, or do you
have a telling action that you would like to share with the other readers?
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Great information. I get so tired of writing the same actions...well, not actually writing them, but searching for a new way to write them. lol Thanks.
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