ANNE GREENE here:
Before
our fun Halloween Blog Hop I talked
with you about body language for our characters so you can show rather than tell. Here are some more gestures you might want
to incorporate with your characters.
BOREDOM:
The hand supporting the head to stop
from falling asleep. The onset of boredom usually begins by the chin being
supported by the thumb. As the character becomes more and more bored, the chin
becomes supported by the fist, and then full-blown when the head is supported
by the entire hand.
IMPATIENCE:
Drumming the fingers on a table or
nearby surface and tapping the feet signal
the character wants action now. The faster one taps, the more impatient the
character has become.
EVALUATION:
An index finger on the cheek shows
the character is thinking or trying to make a decision. The chin stroke also shows evaluation as
does a thumb beneath the chin and index
finger on the chin.
NEGATIVE
DECISION: Character sits back in their
chair with crossed arms and legs means a negative decision has been made.
POSITIVE
DECISION: Character strokes chin and
then leans forward with arms open or picks up something you’ve offered shows
the character has agreed with your proposition.
STALLING:
If a character doesn’t want to make a decision, he or she will put a pen or a finger in their mouth to
signal he is unsure. If the character is a smoker, he’s take a puff.
DEJECTION:
Sitting with shoulders slumped and head
supported by the hand.
Most
of the above are negative gestures. Next week our discuss body language that
reveals ONE PERSON IS ATTRACTED TO
ANOTHER.
Which
of the above gestures are new to you and will be something you can use in your
writing? LEAVE A COMMENT. Or ASK A QUESTION.
ANNE
GREENE delights in writing about wounded heroes and gutsy heroines. Her second
novel, a Scottish historical, Masquerade Marriage, won the New
England Reader Choice award, the Laurel Wreath Award, and the Heart of
Excellence Award. The sequel Marriage By
Arrangement releases in December, 2013.
A Texas Christmas Mystery also won
awards. She makes her home in McKinney, Texas. Tim LaHaye led her to the Lord
when she was twenty-one and Chuck Swindoll is her Pastor. View Anne’s travel
pictures and art work at http://www.AnneGreeneAuthor.com.
Anne’s highest hope is that her stories transport the reader to an awesome new
world and touch hearts to seek a deeper spiritual relationship with the Lord
Jesus. Buy Anne’s books at http://www.PelicanBookGroup.com.
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This really helps to show rather than tell!
ReplyDeleteHi Anne, the negative and positive decision gestures are something I can use. I'll keep those in mind when I'm writing. Thanks for the tips! Wendy Davy
ReplyDeleteThanks Anne. I am getting started writing and it is so helpful to have professional advise right from the start.
ReplyDeleteI know I will be referring to your helpful teachings a lot.
Mary Johnson
Fantastic to see you here, Mary! Thanks for visiting. I'm glad these lessons are helpful.
ReplyDeleteHi, thanks for this! You asked if these work while dating....I don't remember, but I know they'll work with my husband ;) Thanks.
ReplyDeleteHi Susan, Yep, they do work with men. Great to know isn't it?
ReplyDeleteThis iss a great blog
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